Tiana's Emo Poem

LadyT

LadyT

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I refer to myself in the 3rd person
I like that thing called narcisism
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
I think my poems are rad...
in reality they are pretty effin sad
its like the mesosphere
kinda but not really clear
My emotardness is like cow dung
this $hit must get flung
I tend to refer to celestial stuff
even when people think, "my god, that's enough"
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
Tiana's Ego poem.....
what do you guys think?
 
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The rhyme and meter were a bit off and there was hardly any mention of celestial globes. Such limited mention of globes tends to make the poem less attractive...
 
LadyT said:
I refer to myself in the 1st person
I like that thing called narcisism
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
I think my poems are rad...
in reality they are pretty effin sad
I tend to refer to celestial stuff
even when people think, "my god, that's enough"
See I think I'm so deep
But I'm really just an internet geek
Tiana's Ego poem.....
what do you guys think?
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Horrible. Have another doobie. :ILUM::cig:
 
Damocles said:
The rhyme and meter were a bit off and there was hardly any mention of celestial globes. Such limited mention of globes tends to make the poem less attractive...
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The meter isn's supposed to be traditional btw. I'm a non conformist when it comes to my poetry.
 
Yes, and Threedee likes to kick back and watch the poor fools suffer through it. Of course, he would be drinking too... :clink:
 
Threedee said:
Yes, and Threedee likes to kick back and watch the poor fools suffer through it. Of course, he would be drinking too... :clink:
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Isn't it fun refering to yourself in the 3rd person?

Tiana is having such a fun friday now.
 
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Threedee thinks this is referring to himself in the 3rd Person. He is pretty sure that is what it is... You can school him if he is wrong.
 
Threedee said:
Threedee thinks this is referring to himself in the 3rd Person. He is pretty sure that is what it is... You can school him if he is wrong.
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Threedee is totally correct. Tiana is TOTALLY wrong and meant to say 3rd.
 
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