Jesus H. Christ. So many words...no improvement.
Here, let me help you. You wrote: "I haven't withdrawn anything. The two changes I made to the ten Commandments made it more relevant today than when God made it. That is the problem that you insist on ignoring, for reasons that are obvious."
Here is how I would have written that bolded part. You may see it as an improvement or you may consider your phrasing to be superior:
The two changes I made to the Ten Commandments made it more relevant today than when your supposed "god" wrote them.
So...does your rendition do greater justice to your position...or does mine?