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    Default Needed: 4th verse.

    I have a song that I kind of like, but I need another verse or two. If I put it up here, will you idiots help me write the rest of it?

    For those who don't know me, "idiot" is a term of endearment.

    Whaddayasay?

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    Allright, just recorded it. Keep in mind, I don't sing or play guitar professionally, but here it is.

    4th verse, gotta keep in theme.

    Just open the url and it should play:

    http://www.myspace.com/dudicledude

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beefy View Post

    For those who don't know me, "idiot" is a term of endearment.

    Whaddayasay?
    Thanks, Beefy, you just made me snort coffee up my nose!
    My goal in life is to be as good a person as my dog thinks I am.

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    That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

    Try this one.

    I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

    I thought I saw you with the mailman.

    You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

    But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.

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    Yeah. Beefy. That was pretty damn good. You sound rockstarish. You should go with this.
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    You should join me and Grind's band.
    "Do not think that I came to bring peace... I did not come to bring peace, but a sword." - Matthew 10:34

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    Quote Originally Posted by Desh View Post
    That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

    Try this one.

    I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

    I thought I saw you with the mailman.

    You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

    But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.
    fuck yeah shrubbie! I was looking for a mailman angle, but I couldn't get it. This is going in. Lets go for a 5th verse.

    Yeah. Beefy. That was pretty damn good. You sound rockstarish. You should go with this.
    You da man Asshat. i mean it.

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    What about:


    Where are we
    In the absence of god?
    What am I?
    Please hold me, I am scared!
    I don't want to die!
    And I knew it wasn't you
    Because you always said you'd treat me right
    "Do not think that I came to bring peace... I did not come to bring peace, but a sword." - Matthew 10:34

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    Or maybe:

    Go seek her out all courteously,
    And say I come,
    Wind of spices whose song is ever
    Epithalamium.
    O, hurry over the dark lands
    And run upon the sea
    For seas and lands shall not divide us
    My love and me.
    And I knew it wasn't you
    Because you always said you'd treat me right
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    I was donating my time at the local school

    I thought I saw you the principle.

    You were sharpening his pencil and he was teaching you the rules

    But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would alway treat me right.

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    Right or wrong
    ten inches long
    polyester thong
    out of control gut busting girth
    Devalue of worth
    BUt you always said you'd try to treat me right right?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Watermark View Post
    What about:


    Where are we
    In the absence of god?
    What am I?
    Please hold me, I am scared!
    I don't want to die!
    And I knew it wasn't you
    Because you always said you'd treat me right
    Jesus.

    Quote Originally Posted by Watermark View Post
    Or maybe:

    Go seek her out all courteously,
    And say I come,
    Wind of spices whose song is ever
    Epithalamium.
    O, hurry over the dark lands
    And run upon the sea
    For seas and lands shall not divide us
    My love and me.
    And I knew it wasn't you
    Because you always said you'd treat me right
    Seriously, is this emo? I'm too old to know if this is a gag or not.

    Anyhow, give me 11 minutes, I just have to rythmize shrubbie's lyrics and I'll have a second version up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Desh View Post
    That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

    Try this one.

    I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

    I thought I saw you with the mailman.

    You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

    But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.
    LMAO - Desh that is pretty funny.

    Beefy I thought you sound great! You have a great voice, even when you are just talking. The song is pretty catchy.

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