Needed: 4th verse.

[Beefy]

I have a song that I kind of like, but I need another verse or two. If I put it up here, will you idiots help me write the rest of it?

For those who don't know me, "idiot" is a term of endearment.

Whaddayasay?

[evince]

Post away big Kahuna

[Beefy]

Allright, just recorded it. Keep in mind, I don't sing or play guitar professionally, but here it is.

4th verse, gotta keep in theme.

Just open the url and it should play:

http://www.myspace.com/dudicledude

[Thorn]

For those who don't know me, "idiot" is a term of endearment.

Whaddayasay?

Thanks, Beefy, you just made me snort coffee up my nose!

[evince]

That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

Try this one.

I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

I thought I saw you with the mailman.

You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.

[Blackwater Lunchbreak]

Yeah. Beefy. That was pretty damn good. You sound rockstarish. You should go with this.

[FUCK THE POLICE]

You should join me and Grind's band.

[Beefy]

That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

Try this one.

I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

I thought I saw you with the mailman.

You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.

fuck yeah shrubbie! I was looking for a mailman angle, but I couldn't get it. This is going in. Lets go for a 5th verse.


Yeah. Beefy. That was pretty damn good. You sound rockstarish. You should go with this.
You da man Asshat. i mean it.

[Minister of Truth]

American Idol

[FUCK THE POLICE]

What about:


Where are we
In the absence of god?
What am I?
Please hold me, I am scared!
I don't want to die!
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right

[FUCK THE POLICE]

Or maybe:

Go seek her out all courteously,
And say I come,
Wind of spices whose song is ever
Epithalamium.
O, hurry over the dark lands
And run upon the sea
For seas and lands shall not divide us
My love and me.
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right

[evince]

I was donating my time at the local school

I thought I saw you the principle.

You were sharpening his pencil and he was teaching you the rules

But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would alway treat me right.

[Blackwater Lunchbreak]

Right or wrong
ten inches long
polyester thong
out of control gut busting girth
Devalue of worth
BUt you always said you'd try to treat me right right?

[Beefy]

What about:


Where are we
In the absence of god?
What am I?
Please hold me, I am scared!
I don't want to die!
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right

Jesus.


Or maybe:

Go seek her out all courteously,
And say I come,
Wind of spices whose song is ever
Epithalamium.
O, hurry over the dark lands
And run upon the sea
For seas and lands shall not divide us
My love and me.
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me right

Seriously, is this emo? I'm too old to know if this is a gag or not.

Anyhow, give me 11 minutes, I just have to rythmize shrubbie's lyrics and I'll have a second version up.

[Cancel7]

That is utterly sweet beefy and I Like your voice.

Try this one.

I stepped out to get the paper at six am.

I thought I saw you with the mailman.

You were licking his stamps and he was dilivering.

But I knew it wasnt you because you always said you would treat me right.

LMAO - Desh that is pretty funny.

Beefy I thought you sound great! You have a great voice, even when you are just talking. The song is pretty catchy.

[Blackwater Lunchbreak]

I can't accept the truth I guess
for to do so would be death.
so I look the other way and pretend
and put you on a pedestal, attributing to you moral perfection, in spite of all evidence, merely to protect myself.
I don't why i believe you treat me right.

[Cancel7]

I was donating my time at the local school

I thought I saw you the principle.

You were sharpening his pencil and he was teaching you the rules

But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would alway treat me right.

Desh you have quite the naughty little mind. Playing professor/student with your husband perhaps?

[evince]

Hey I was just going with the premise

[FUCK THE POLICE]

Jesus.



Seriously, is this emo? I'm too old to know if this is a gag or not.

Anyhow, give me 11 minutes, I just have to rythmize shrubbie's lyrics and I'll have a second version up.

It amused me to put melodramtic emo lyrics down and then stick a nonsensical "And I knew it wasn't you because you said you'd always treat me right" at the end to pretend to seriously match your pattern.

And the second one is a James Joyce poem.

[Blackwater Lunchbreak]

It amused me to put melodramtic emo lyrics down and then stick a nonsensical "And I knew it wasn't you because you said you'd always treat me right" at the end to pretend to seriously match your pattern.

And the second one is a James Joyce poem.


Right. You thought it was your best work. admit it.

[FUCK THE POLICE]

Right. You thought it was your best work. admit it.

YEs.

[evince]

I was shopping over at the local store.

When I though I might of seen you with the govenor

He was passing you bills and your knees were on the floor

But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would always treat me right


This is addictive

[FUCK THE POLICE]

Was my gag even remotely funny?

[evince]

Was my gag even remotely funny?

I thought the emo bit was pretty funny.

I missed it because I was playing with the lines.

[Beefy]

Alright shrubbie. Your 4th verse is in there:

http://www.myspace.com/dudicledude

[Cancel7]

Love it.

[evince]

5
I was donating my time at the local school

I thought I saw you the principle.

You were sharpening his pencil and he was teaching you the rules
But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would alway treat me right.


6
I was shopping over at the local store.

When I though I might of seen you with the govenor

He was passing you bills and your knees were on the floor

But I knew it wasnt you because you said you would always treat me right

[FUCK THE POLICE]

"Water's Rambler"

Definitely a reference to me.

[Beefy]

"Water's Rambler"

Definitely a reference to me.

LOL Yes. It was a tough decision between "Water's" Rambler, and "Deadman's Flying Troupe" Rambler. I settled on the former.

[Beefy]

Anyhow. Lets work on this. I'm going to bed - working the midnight to 9 am shift.

Thanks for your help shrubbie. I love your way of thinking, its right inline with mine in terms of lyrics, only better than mine. Lets meld heads.

To the rest of you idiots, try to be more like shrubbie.

[Minister of Truth]

What about:


Where are we
In the absence of God?
What am I?
Please hold me, I am scared!
I don't want to die!
And I knew it wasn't you
Because you always said you'd treat me rightFixed.


American IdolHere, here! :clink:

[Cancel3]

Great stuff, Beefy. Catchy tune and excellent lyrics. (damn thing is stuck in my head now)

Desh, you write good stuff.

While this song plays in my head all day I will see if any lines pop into my head.




Very cool, Beefy.

[evince]

crap the video is gone

[evince]

It was a really good video

he was as cute as hell and played a pretty damn good guitar and had a good voice.


the tune was bluesly and cool.


I can still remember the tune

[evince]

Anyhow. Lets work on this. I'm going to bed - working the midnight to 9 am shift.

Thanks for your help shrubbie. I love your way of thinking, its right inline with mine in terms of lyrics, only better than mine. Lets meld heads.

To the rest of you idiots, try to be more like shrubbie.

hey thanks my fellow traveler


into the mist

[J Craft]

This person has passed? Very sad.

[Mott the Hoople]

What? Something happened to Beefy? WTF?

What happened?

[Damocles]

He was pretty gifted... and funny.